Friday, September 11, 2015

DNF Review: Legacy of Kings

Legacy of Kings by Eleanor Herman
Publisher: Harlequin Teen
Release Date: August 18th, 2015
Source: Book Expo America
Date Read: DNF
384 pages
Rating: --


Imagine a time when the gods turn a blind eye to the agony of men, when the last of the hellions roam the plains and evil stirs beyond the edges of the map. A time when cities burn, and in their ashes, empires rise.

Alexander, Macedonia’s sixteen-year-old heir, is on the brink of discovering his fated role in conquering the known world but finds himself drawn to newcomer Katerina, who must navigate the dark secrets of court life while hiding her own mission: kill the Queen. But Kat’s first love, Jacob, will go to unthinkable lengths to win her, even if it means competing for her heart with Hephaestion, a murderer sheltered by the prince. And far across the sea, Zofia, a Persian princess and Alexander’s unmet fiancée, wants to alter her destiny by seeking the famed and deadly Spirit Eaters.

Weaving fantasy with the salacious and fascinating details of real history, New York Times bestselling author Eleanor Herman reimagines the greatest emperor the world has ever known: Alexander the Great, in the first book of the Blood of Gods and Royals series.

I received this ARC from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.


For a historical fiction book that promised "fascinating details of real history", I got none of it. By 150 pages, which is about a quarter way through the book, I could no longer take it anymore. I was bored by the dry writing that was "tell and not show", and the characters failed to affect me in anyway.

Upon first hearing about Legacy of Kings, I became excited for the take on Ancient Macedonia and Ancient Mesopotamia. I was expecting a tale filled with action and politics. Unfortunately, what I got was a bunch of relationships, and perspectives of characters I didn't necessarily care about.


Jacob didn't need to be in this novel, I'm sure. Also, who is Zofia? Do I even remember reading about her? No.

Nevertheless, this is still a DNF, which kind of means that my opinion isn't entirely valid since I don't know what happens after page 150. Though I have read multiple reviews stating that it really doesn't get any better, which is why I'll be holding this off indefinitely.

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That's disappointing! I was super excited for this one but I can't stand boring beginnings and dry writing. From the first time I heard of this though, I was bit put off by all the characters/potential love interests in the description. Might still give it a try but now I'm glad I didn't end up getting a review copy.

Sorry, this one was a disappointment Val! =)
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Well. This is not good news. Nope. Not at all. It was so promising! I mean, there were costumes, and Macedonia, and purple. That sounds like fun! But this end result does not, I am afraid. This just keeps getting pushed lower and lower on the shelf. Sorry this made you bored and annoyed :(
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Yup. I know a fair amount of people who DNf'd ths one. I finished it and the plot did eventually kick in but it took way too long. And yes, Jacob didn't need a perspective and neither did Zofia. Neither did Hephaestion or Olympias for that matter. If it had just been Alex and Katerina I would have been much happier. Although Cyn was my favorite character. Sorry this one didn't work for you.
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Aww...sorry you didn't really click with this one Val. :( But I can completely see why - it's definitely hard to read a book about characters and relationships you don't really care about. It's a shame, because the whole Ancient Mesopotamia plot sounds really, really amazing. :/ Thanks for sharing your thoughts though and, as always, fabulous review! <3
1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
NOOOOO VAL. I had this in my shopping basket D: but omg, the things that MOST tick me off are unnecessary POVs and tons of showing instead of telling. o.O This is not good news. This is terrible. I HAVE TO RETHINK MY LIFE CHOICES NOW.
1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Really. Oh I did love this book! Maybe it was because it was about Alexander the Great who is such an influential person in history for me. I loved reading his story along with all the other characters. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it as much as I did. Since I don't read much historical fiction I definitely thought this was a good one!

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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
I hate telling and not showing and bland POVs, therefore I think I shall remove thsi from my TBR. You know, this is actually the third negative review I've read this week, and you all tend to agree, so yeahhh, not feeling bad for losing interest. Great honest review, though.
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
I hate the tell instead of show mentality. That's the whole point of the story, to craft the writing in such a way that we can SEE it, there's no need to tell. Frankly lots of books penned for their "historical" ties spend way too much time trying to weave in the facts as opposed to telling an actually story. And let's be honest, spouting off historical facts is boring. Great review!

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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Well, the petty part of me is kind of glad you didn't love it because this book was the torture at BEA and I refused to stand in a line for a ticket to stand in line later to get the book. Yea, I'm glad I'm not missing out. I'm so mature sometimes.
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Your review is KIND of amazing, Val. You know, just kinda. I used to feel iffy about writing DNF reviews because I didn't think I could really weigh in, since I hadn't finished it, and it wasn't really fair. But these days, I don't feel like that, and I enjoy reading other people's DNF reviews. It gives me a really different perspective to a negative review, even, and I think it's theraputic to write them, too, to get all the thoughts, irritations, ect. off your chest, so they don't tag along with you and bug you incessantly.
HOPE YOUR NEXT READ IS A MILLION TIMES MORE FUN FOR YOU! xx
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1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
I'm so sad! I just requested this one from the library today. So no political intrigue? That's lame.
1 reply · active 501 weeks ago
Aww this makes me sad, as I was pretty excited for this one! Although my excitement was already sort of dampened by the publisher not responding to my NG request :(
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This makes me so sad :( I myself loved this book but I can understand why you didn't like it so much! I hope you next read is better, Val! :)
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